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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Tacoko on Tue Nov 27, 2012 7:51 pm

    SO LYCHEE

    I typed up and put up chapter 1 of the fic already. hfsjahfjhjals

    You can look at it here! Make sure to read the forward and stuff too c:

    http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/326446/
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Tue Nov 27, 2012 11:45 pm

    ooo taco it definitely has potential! can't wait to see what's next...

    AND ON THAT NOTE!! PRETZEL! it's time to get your sexy heechul on!! WOOT!!

    Spoiler:
    MMM….. What’s that refreshing smell? What’s that breeze? Where is that heat coming from? Am I dreaming? It must be dream, the fresh smell, the wonderful breeze, and the snoring…. SNORING?!?! WHAT THE…. You slowly open your eyes almost blinded by the bright sun hovering over you. You look to your left… how lovely, such beautiful palm trees. Huh? Palm trees? You look between your feet and see a beautiful ocean. You felt the grittiness of the sand between your fingers; you look to your right and see a guy drenching wet. Ok seriously, what’s going on? You lean in closer at this strange man snoring. Ok seriously, now it has to be a dream.
    “Um, Hello? Mister?” you started to poke the man’s cheek. No response.
    “Sir, can you tell me where I am? WAKE UP ALREADY!” you shook his shoulder and he screamed in fright.
    “Oh no, a crazy fan! Where am I? You! YOU KIDNAPED ME! How dare you kidnap the hottest member of Super Junior! He flipped his hair and started to walk towards a forest of palm trees behind you.
    “Heechul? On this strange island? (Well it seems like an island) WITH ME? Hey! Who are you calling crazy?” you jolted and started to follow him.
    “Go away, crazy person. It’s bad enough that you kidnapped me and now you want to follow me? Stupid."
    ”Excuse me, I didn’t kidnap you. And second of all, where the hell are you going? You look more lost than I am. AND YOU SMELL LIKE ALCOHOL! Disgusting.” You grunted as you followed him gathering sticks.
    “I never should have gone to that cruise, I should have stayed home.”
    “Cruise? IT WAS YOU!” you grabbed his wet collar and held it tightly. He gripped onto your hands but your strength was too strong. “It was you who pushed me off the boat. YOU DRUNK TURD!”
    “Hey, I didn’t push you or anything. I was drunk and I tripped.”
    “You tripped and grabbed me with you and we both fell into the water! I WANT TO GO HOME!” you pushed him down to a puddle of dirty water and he grunted even louder. “Ok, let’s look for stuff to make a fire.”
    “Screw you, I’ll look on my own.”
    “Fine!
    “FINE!”
    You both parted in opposite directions towards the forest. Let’s be honest, you really didn’t know what you were doing but Heechul probably didn’t either.
    ~~

    It was getting dark, weird sounds started to creep you out. The stars look beautiful in the sky and the moon was bright and clear but all you could think about is FOOD! Your stomach was growling and you need something to eat. While looking through the forest, you look up a palm tree and see one big and beautiful coconut. You started to panic; you didn’t know how to reach it. You took off your jacket and wrapped it around the tree and held on to the sleeves. You were desperate; you wanted to climb the tree. You carefully scooted your way up the tree. You were suddenly pulled off the tree by a strong grip and landed on the ground drenched in dirty water. You saw Heechul using your jacket to climb the tree. You grabbed on to his back and didn’t let go.
    “Hey jerk face, where do you think you are going?”
    “Let go, crazy person. I’m hungry. I want that coconut.”
    “Fat chance, I saw it first.” Heechul was struggling to hold on.
    “Let ME GOOOO…” His hands slipped, you moved out of the way and he plopped into the pool of dirty water yet again.
    “GOD! Why are you such a pain? Quick, find some rocks or something and we’ll throw it at the coconut.”
    “And what will that do?”
    “Get it down dumb dumb.” You both desperately searched the ground look for some rocks big enough to knock the coconut. You took turns throwing rocks aim at the big green coconut. It finally came down and Heechul found a big rock to break it in half. You sipped the yummy coconut water and chewed the coconut flesh. It was refreshing. You looked at Heechul from the side of your eye and wow he looked so dirty. His white collared shirt turned brown from the color of the yucky water and his black dress pants were filthy. You couldn’t but help to laugh. He snapped and eyed you up and down .
    “What’s so funny? Yes I know I look good even when I’m dirty. It’s a good right? Ah, what can I do? My parents made me this way?” Seriously, in such a bad situation he still has the energy to brag? “Thank god I brought my handy mirror.” He dug into his pocket and pulled out a small mirror. Your eyes almost popped out of your head. You slowly creped behind his back, eyeing that mirror.
    “Heechul, where did you get that mirror from?”
    “Damn woman, you are giving me chills. I always carry it with me. I’m afraid you’ll break it if you look at it.” Your chest started to tighten
    “Heechul, give me that mirror! That is the perfect way to get the hell out of here! “
    “What the hell are you talking about? It’s mine!” he pulled his arm away making you reach for the mirror. You were on your toes tempting to reach the mirror. He stared you down and jolted around you and started to run. You chased after him. You were getting close to him, he was running towards the beach where you first saw him. You were so close. You jumped on his back and tackled him. He fell hard to the sand and the mirror fell into the water! You tried to get up and grab the mirror as it was floating away but Heechul grabbed you by the ankle and you fell face first into the gritty sand. He then tried to go into the water but it was too late. It was gone.
    “Shit!” he splashed in the water out of frustration. You lay on your stomach in the sand just glaring at him. “It’s all your fault. I HATE YOU!” he continued to splash in the water out of frustration. He looked so beautiful. The moon shined amongst the blue water. The moon’s light just radiated his white skin. You couldn't help but look. Your eyes met, he slowly came towards you. You could see his toned body through his white shirt. His black hair was dripping wet. You quickly got up slowly walking backwards still laying your eyes on him. He was close to you, too close. He felt his hot breathe, his soft look suddenly turned sour as he grabbed your neck in a choke hold.
    “IT”S ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU PUSHED ME INTO THE OCEAN IN THE FIRST PLACE! AND NOW I’M STUCK HERE BECAUSE OF YOU!” you tried to free yourself from his grip but it was difficult. He held your neck and quickly pushed you towards the water. You were drenched in the salted water, your eyes started to tear up. You saw his tall body hovering over you. It was too much. You had it. It was ENOUGH! You grabbed his ankle and he fell into the water too. You pulled his hair and he held on to your wrists trying to free himself. He pushed your arms away from your grip and tried to choke you again. You dodged his long arms and jumped on his back and wrapped one arm around his neck while your other arm kept punching his waist.
    “You are hurting ME! HOW DARE YOU! I will make sure I sue you when we get out from here!” He released himself from your choke hold and you fell backwards in the water. This time the water was deep, you started to sink in. He panicked and dove into the water.
    ~~

    Your eyes were wide open and all you saw was water. Nothing but water. Were you going to die like this? Just because of one guy? But wait, who is that? Heechul? He swam right up to you, your eyes met again. He grabbed your waist and pulled you close to him. His lips met yours, and you held on to him tightly. Your eyes closed, you felt like you were rising up from the water. You both reached the surface gasping for air. His hands were still on your waist and your hands were wrapped around his neck.
    “Are you ok?”
    “What was that?”
    “I was giving you air so you could breathe, or else you would drown.”
    “That’s it, just giving me air?” you pouted your lips and he smirked.
    “Ha, you think I was going to do this?” he leaned towards your lips and passionately kissed you in the blue ocean. Your hands wrapped around his neck gently pulling his soft hair. Your moment was cut short with a blinding light coming from the distance.
    “What the? Is that??” The distant light came closer, and closer. It started to get bigger, and then you hear a loud honk of a horn. IT WAS THE CRUISE SHIP!! They came for you and Heechul. You were rescued. The crew gave you towels to dry off and some new clothes to put on. You and Heechul got separated in the crowd and you tried to look for him. You got escorted back to your room to change. You changed quickly and went out in search of him. You ran towards the deck where you fill originally, you looked all over.
    “Hey, crazy fan. I’m right here.” You turned around to see Heechul in a dashing suit standing by the corner of the deck holding a rose.
    “I found you, I was worried…”
    “I have to congratulate you. You won my heart. And now I can’t let you go.”
    “Hmph, earlier you were calling me crazy and attempted to kill me.”
    “That was all part of the fun. How about we start over ok?” he smiled as he handed you a single rose.
    “Ok, how do you want to start?” he looked over the deck and looked back at you. You both smiled.
    “How about we go for a swim?”
    ~~The end~~

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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Tacoko on Wed Nov 28, 2012 10:21 am

    omg thanks Lychee gdghjdadhjfhnshajfj

    AND LYCHEE AHAHA

    The oneshot is GREAT ;D Onion Thumbs Up
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Tacoko on Wed Nov 28, 2012 10:48 am

    Double post...

    I...

    Yoseob's video for Caffeine came out and um...



    Save me please.

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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 12:37 pm

    hahaha thank you taco.. and yes i have seen the mv for caffeine but here's my honest review of the thing...

    he looks great, his vocals were good, the dancing was smooth BUT the english is AH! "you're like a caffeine" but it sounded like he was saying "you are like a coffee" and there was another one something about being bad or something... so yea and the vid itself was good but i donno i felt like he could have done more..

    but overall it was decent.

    and oh btw taco, i headed over to the fan fic blog on tumblr and you posted that it may just be posts of random stuff, so if that's the case can I post my one shots there?
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Tacoko on Wed Nov 28, 2012 12:45 pm

    Ahaha, the Engrish~ it's "You're like a caffeine" and "You're bad to me." I think but other than that I really love the song and the MV was so cool and it's just dfshafklghufh;jas;gklb;fescla

    EXCUSE ME WHILE I DIE AHHHHH

    AND YEAH! That's totally fine! 8D Since it's just a blog now for fanfiction, you totally can 8DD
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 2:06 pm

    yea that you're bad to me part was wrong too... i just feel kinda bad since the song is called caffeine, so you would think that we would say the pharse right. this is the reason why I think there should be a job of just proof reading english lyrics in a song. that would be a great job!

    and yay i'll get to posting then.. and taco i think you should DEFINITELY post the one shot of jay park! IT"S SOO GOOD!
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Tacoko on Wed Nov 28, 2012 2:27 pm

    Omfg yessss. Can that be my job pls omfgggg

    And AH! Yeah, I think I will do that later when I get home yes~
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:08 pm

    lol, it would be a good job. and btw, i went ahead and posted the yoseob one shot part 1 today! hopefully with all these posts, it will get our blog up and running.

    and WHERE IS THE BIRTHDAY GIRL?!?!
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Tacoko on Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:13 pm

    Yes I just saw~ I love how Yoseob keeps getting my name wrong and then starts calling me Nats omfgf gsdhjagfhasd baby

    And I will post th Jay Park one up sometime tomorrow. I'm focused on typing chapter 2 of the Beast fanfic and

    My brother is going to court again tomorrow and we're hoping for some good news with that, because there is a video that shows that my brother was actually a customer at the place that was robbed and not one of the robbers and yeah fghkgfkjas hoping for good news there

    AND I KNOW RIGHT

    PRETZEL WHERE ARE YOUUU
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 10:06 pm

    hehehe it was really fun writing it! and ooo that's really good about your bro.. that may help get him out of there...

    good luck to him Onion Thumbs Up
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:13 pm

    double post.... so this ballad group called 2am... i think they are under jyp, so they just upload a practice vid of their upcoming concert and they covered some kpop songs including 2ne1 i love you and big bang's fantastic baby... and all i can say is WOW!! their voices is STUNNING! and i love it when a guy can hit those high notes! unf! check it out!

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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Thepinkbookworm on Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:43 pm

    I'M HERE!!! Another year older, but only a little bit wiser Rolling Eyes Sorry I wasn't on much. I had work to do so I could only like check my email occasionally. But I'm back and Lychee, I LOVE the one-shot! I love how you wrote Heechul. A little weird with the whole attempted murder thing, but the ending scene was PERFECT. I can easily imagine him in a nice suit, with a rose... Onion Nosebleed Thank you for that wonderful birthday present Hug

    Taco, I hope everything works out for your brother. And I am totally going to listen to that song once I have the time! And your video, too, Lychee! They look interesting :3 Nodding
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Thepinkbookworm on Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:45 pm

    Oh, random thought: Lychee, where are you going to post the Heechul one-shot? Cause I was wondering if I could post it as a one-shot on Asian Fanfics. With full credit of course. I just really like it and want to share it with the world! Unless you are doing the Tumblr thing, which what is that about?
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    Re: The K-Pop Thread

    Post by Laila007 on Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:10 am

    PRETZEL! Hug good that you're back!! i'm sooooooooooooooo glad you liked the heechul one shot!! i had fun writing it... and taco had made a tumblr for our g-dragon fan fic that she wrote... and i joined in so she decided to just use it to post random one shots and other fan fics...sooo i just posted the yosoeb one shot today,, but i'm not sure about how the rest will go... the blog doesn't have alot of followers yet..i MAY just post it on the tumblr......... but i'm not sure yet.
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    Post by Thepinkbookworm on Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:15 am

    Ahhh, I see. Okay, sounds like a cool group. What is the url so I can follow?

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